Safe and Sound

I had to hurry, she could be hurt, or worse. The rain washed away all traces of her, it was impossible to find her scent, and I couldn't hear anything. I knew Granny should't have sent her alone. I tried to tell her, but she just gave me THAT look. The fire in her eyes was much to great to go against. There was no way to argue.
    At first, I thought I was being much too paranoid; she had to grow up at one point, right? Then Granny told me she hadn't been heard of in a while, that I had to go look for her. I had this feeling in the pit of my stomach. It wasn't nervousness, it was anger. I was furious at Granny for sending her alone; for not listening to me the first time. Now I was out in the dark, looking for her. I didn't really care that I had to take the time, I just wanted her back safe, that's all I really wanted.

            MY NEW NARUHINA STORY. DO YOU GUYS THINK I SHOULD CONTINUE OR DO I GET RID OF IT? I CAN'T BRING MYSELF TO DO EITHER. I NEED A PUSH. HELP!!!